The Lady with the Red Shoes

November 30, 2009

The short story “The lady with the Red Shoes” written by Ita Daly is about an Irish man who spends his holidays traditionally every Easter in a hotel called McAndrews. The story takes place in the North of Mayo, which is a typical lonesome landscape next to the cliff line.

In the beginning of the text the lyrical “I” (, whose name is unknown,) describes the environment around the McAndrews and gives the reader some information about the hotels part in the Irish history.

He informs the reader about the reasons for his annual stay which is – except this time – usually with his whole family and explains his emotional connection to this place. It’s obvious, that the McAndrews, although it’s nothing special for the generality, is something like a precious retreat for the old-fashioned lyrical “I” to escape from the modern world. Even though there is a gap between him and most of the others, he feels able to laugh about all the foolishness in the world.

This problem gets more clearly when the lyrical “I” talks about the departures from the McAndrews, which are each time a painful experience because he has to get back into the “world”.

At this point of the story the underlying plot of the short story starts. The lyrical “I” sits down in the dinning-room of the McAndrews. During the waiter called Murphy wants to talk about the wine a woman with a pink dress and red shoes wants to place an order. The lyrical “I” starts to watch her exactly and follows every of her facial expressions. Henceforward the reader can follow again all of his thoughts about this woman.

This woman has an inadequate behaviour and Murphy has to pull himself together to be still polite.

Due to her American accent and her unblemished appearance he is surprised how such a woman finds her way to the old-fashioned McAndrews. After she had eaten up, she asks Murphy for an ashtray. Murphy sends her in an unfriendly way to the blue-sitting room. The lyrical “I” follows her after he has finished his meal, too. He absorbs in his thoughts and makes some theses about her origin as well as her complete life. Suddenly he gets a complete different perception of her behaviour and he even notices that she has an accent which exists only in North Mayo. He extends his theses with the assumption that in the past the woman with the red shoes was poor and escaped to America. And now she comes back to show her change and wants to impress the others with her appearance.

The lyrical “I” thinks about telling her this facts but prefers to go to bed and to think about all again.

(André)

Renarration

The beginning of the short story “The lady with the Red Shoes”, written by Ita Daly, is about the beautiful West of Ireland and the pros of the old-fashioned McAndrews Hotel.

The narrator of this story is and was very impressed of the landscape in West of Ireland. He likes the peace of this area because there is no industry and only a few little cities. But not only he likes that place, his whole family come back from Dublin every Easter since a lot of years and he also comes back with his wife since they are married. But this year she is ill at Easter and her sister comes from London and the narrator is happy that his wife can do something else because maybe she does not like the old atmosphere in the West of Ireland. But he likes to come back to the McAndrews. Although the McAndrews has a very bad place for a hotel. A few years ago there was nothing in the near of the hotel. No city, no church and no beach where anybody can swim. It is build on headland where you can look at the Atlantic, but the sea and the cliff are so dangerous that you can’t swim or boating. Otherwise the people only could come with a train from Westport, which stops on the hotel grounds. Nowadays in the near of the hotel is a little city named Kilgory and the people come with cars but the hotel is still old-fashioned. That’s what the narrator likes. So he thinks that he is maybe a snob, but he does not like the new things like cocktail bars or something like that. But he knows that everyone who comes to McAndrews like the same things that he likes. Because of that he settles in very fast. So he does the same things as every year. He walks, reads novels and watches the Atlantic coast.

(Marco)

The narrator say McAndrews has been a retreat since his youth. He describes it like a very precious hideaway from the new modern world. Another problem is the generation gap between the lyrical “I” and his son, who think that his father is a snob. The time doesn’t match to the narrator’s kind of thinking although in his opinion being able to laugh about all stupid foolishness in the world.

Every time before leaving the McAndrews and getting back in to the “world”, he gets nervous and depressive. He tries to detract from these thoughts while drinking a bottle of wine. The narrator tells about his past and spending some years in West Africa as a young man. At this time, he missed the typical Irish twilight which you can find at the dinner-time. He loves this half-wilful melancholia atmosphere and compares the dinner with a ceremony.

He takes his usual seat and the waiter called Murphy starts to talk with him about the wine. Suddenly another new female person summons him. The narrator describes the place where only this woman is sitting. He criticizes the woman because she sat down without consulting Murphy as well as her unblemished appearance. Both, the narrator and Murphy engross their thoughts about the lady before Murphy takes her order at first. When she orders a double Scotch on the rocks and the menu card with an American accent, the lyrical “I” gets some associations about American TV-thrillers and goes on watching her. While she is studying the card, he notices her face growing apprehensive. Relating to this, he tells us something about Mrs Byrne, who is an artistic cook with only a few of special menus. He explains that she only uses local fixings and has traditional ways to cook. The narrator adds that he understands if somebody of the modern world (like the woman) is overstrained by reading such a card. She orders snootily something which isn’t on the card and Murphy tries to arrange it. She gets really discourteous and the narrator thinks that Murphy really has to pull himself together to be still polite. The narrator asks himself how such a person comes to the McAndrews.

(André)

He is surprised about how this woman finds her way to McAndrews, because she seems like an American woman and so likes a tourist. For those tourists ten miles away there is a hideous motel. But soon he recognized that the woman is actually impressed by McAndrews. However Murphy thinks that this woman is arrogant and rude. It goes so far that Murphy, who is every time courteous, kindly and advertent, looses in a unique event the control and the whole dinning-room is looking and the lady and him. The lady only eats her meal and shortly after that incident the guest looses the interest in her.

After she had eat up, she attempts to fuse the ice between Murphy and her with a joke, but Murphy keeps at being cold and unfriendly and so she is cold and defiant, too.

She asks the waiter about an ashtray, but he tells her in an unfriendly way, that she has to smoke in the blue-sitting room. He exhibits her in front of the whole dinning-room, so the lady has to control herself, because her face and neck are already red.

After the man has eaten up his meal, he walks to the blue-sitting-room and watches the lady while he smokes a cigar. Meanwhile he recognizes that the lady isn’t American, because she has this accent, which is only spoken in North Mayo. Furthermore he notices that the lady is sad, tired and burn out. Her life is spread out in front of him. So he thinks about her past: She had lived in a miserable cottage and was a tattering little girl. McAndrews was for her a symbol, a world of wealth and comfort. Because of that, that McAndrews is a symbol of wealth and that she is so poor, she wanted to escape from Ireland to America. So she worked maybe as a maid in this hotel and financed so her ticket to America.

All this time, when she was happy in America, she waited for the moment to come back to Ireland and to show every one in the McAndrews that she is now the guest in McAndrews and not the maid. She wanted to impress the other guests with her air, her look and her richness. The lady thinks that everything is like in the past, but in that case she is wrong. In former time the hotel stood for rich people, but today is an other time. The wheal has come round full circle.

First the man broods over telling her this facts, but than he decides to go to bed. When he lies in the bed he thinks about her and his past and about McAndrews, which will soon be a member of the past.

For him McAndrews is although a special landscape and the lady with the red shoes is his heroine, who caught and defined McAndrews.

(Julia)

Andrés experiences

November 30, 2009

When I read the short story the first time, I didn’t realize the whole context, because there were many unknown vocabulary. As recently as I read it a second time, I gradually understand it. The first thought, that comes up to my mind was a painting by Edward Hopper. Feelings of loneliness and melancholia prepossess me and I really could reproduce the situation in my imagination. Especially in the beginning of the text, when the author describes the solitary environment around the McAndrews and its coastline with all the “fury”, these feelings get even more intensive.

At this point, I think it’s expedient to point out some parallels to Edward Hopper. His themes are often interpreted as an expression of isolation and a phenomenon of exclusion of several individuals. The paintings show in most cases “the individual” in dinners, hotel rooms or waiting rooms. All the pictured people seem always to be immersed in melancholia or absorbed in thoughts. This matches exactly to the lyrical “I”. He even says himself that he missed the Irish twilight with its “half-wilful melancholia”, when he spent some time in West Africa as young man.

Based on the attitude by the lyrical “I”, I got the association of a requirement which you can find by every human. In my opinion such a retreat – like the McAndrews for the lyrical “I” – is necessary. I think everybody would understand if I say that sometimes it’s exactly such an atmosphere of loneliness, which we need in stressful moments of life.

The son of the lyrical “I” is called Edward, too. Hap?

Julias experiences

November 30, 2009

Traditional view of the lyrical „I“

  • Association to traditions
    • he’s a traditional men
    • lives in a routine when he is in the McAndrews
    • it’s a tradition to come every year to McAndrews (family tradition)
    • does the same things every year, reads a book from a specific author only in
    • north mayo
  • Lives in the past, can’t identify himself with the presence
    • is considered a an nasty old snob and as a old codger ( his own son thinks in
    • this way)
  • The presence is too modern, too fast, people
    • people has bad manners
    • the insolence of shop assistants and taxidrivers
    • chummy overtures from waiters( deon’t have the behaviour of the waiter,
    • who had the ‘old waiter school’)
    • irritated by cocktail bars and the people, who chat in there(maybe to loud
    • and too much daffy chatting)
  • He is out of fashion in the modern world
  • McAndrews bastion of privilege
  • sees a big gap both his own generation and Edward’s generation
  • his time is out of join
  • likes at McAndrews:
    • the nature (looking down on the hamlet and on the sea, it dates back to the
    • late nineteenth century)
    • no cars and no petrol fumes( his car disappeared into the cavernous garage)
    • kind, McAndrews clientele, old-fashioned, odd perhaps ( like-minded
    • people)
    • dignity and personal privacy
    • waiter is civilly, treats guest on old manners

 

 

 

My experiences:

  • tradition takes place in my live with the “Landjugend Lauenhagen”, we promote tradition in our village, like
    • traditional dances
    • traditional cloth
    • tying of the harvest crown
    • bring people together and teach them the traditional dances
    • built one community
    • celebrate the harvest festival

 

    • Gets early to bed with a good detective novel
  • Likes watching the sea, the changing of the light, watching sea-gulls
  • Although he knows, that all short-lived, he feels peace.

 

 

Marcos experiences

November 30, 2009

-         tells a lot about the landscape: for me it would be boring, but for him it is like a paradise

-         the main characters are very different (narrator is old-fashioned / the lady is modern) =>the conflict

-         the narrator must be very nice but its crazy that he lives in his own old world

-         it is typical for old people that they have there own traditions / so they can do what they proved out and what is good for them

-         nowadays there are people like him, but mostly they are very old, traditional and don’t know anything about the new techniques like the internet or computers in general

-         he built his opinion about somebody without knowing that person (he only notice the person)

-         I think it is a little bit strange that he thinks partly very bad about the lady but he doesn’t say anything to her about her bad behaviour

 

Theme: Irish people who goes away from Ireland and come back.

 

- 150 years ago a lot of people leave Ireland because of the famine and the bad industry

- so there are only 3,5 million people in Ireland but 70 million people with an Irish

background around the world

- the people don’t want to leave Ireland but they have to do it

- there a lot of Irish groups in America

-  but the Irish government did a lot of things for the Irish industry

- nowadays Ireland has the lowest taxes in Europe

- the Irish people have a very high education

- that’s are reasons why big firms like Microsoft and Intel comes and want to produce in

Ireland

- the unemployment rate is 4 % and the lowest in Europe

- so a lot of Irish people comes back from America or other places in the world to work in

their home country

- because of that change the Irish people has a national pride for the first time

Ita Daly

November 30, 2009

Ita Daly is born in Leitrim in the west of Ireland. She took her degree in Spanish and English at University College in Dublin. After graduation she also works in Dublin until her first daughter was born in 1979.

She wrote many short stories, which appeared amongst others in Irish, British and US magazines as well as in anthologies. She is a double winner of Hennessy Literacy Award and has also won an Irish Time Short Story Competition. For example “The Lady with the Red Shoes” was published in 1980.

(André)

Secondary characters

November 30, 2009

Judith

Judith is the wife of the narrator and she must be a very nice and amicable woman, because she has no problem with the tradition in the family of the narrator. She accepts that he wants to drive to the West of Ireland every Easter. Otherwise she is maybe a woman who is a little bit more modern than her husband because he thinks that is it good for her that she doesn’t have to come with him that year.

McAndrews hotel

The hotel has to be very modern in the past for a lot of famous and rich people. But nowadays it is old-fashioned because the style has never changed. So it is only a hotel for snobs like the narrator is. But for people like him, who doesn’t like the modern art of holiday it is the perfect place to relax and calm down.

Waiter

The waiter is normally a very nice and civil man, who tries to understand every wish of the guests. He works for a very long in time in the McAndrews and because of that he knows the guests and there wishes. But if somebody is to extravagant and to uncivil to him he can maybe loose his control.

The cook

The cook of the McAndrews is also a very traditional and old-fashioned woman, because she can only cook the traditional meals which are on the menu for a very long time. So she doesn’t go with the time, but that is no problem for the most guests of the hotel because they are also old-fashioned and don’t need any modern meals.

 

(Marco)

The lyrical “I”

November 30, 2009
  • Detailed observer (even the bees showing…)
  • Relating to the description of the coastline he uses the personification “fury”
  • Also with many sentimental feelings (heartbreaking beautiful…, whiff of Paradise)
  • Keeping traditions, rituals (coming every Easter to the McAndrews)
  • Married 25 years ago à loyal, trusty
  • Romantically? Wants to spending his honeymoon there
  • The stay in this hotel gives him pleasure, likes the lonely position of this place, although there are these dangerous cliffs no beaches
  • He has a Daimler à rich?
  • Old fashioned? Odd? Snobbish? à he stand by his values and accepts other opinions à is open for all
  • Don’t like: bad manners – conservative? The modern world with it’s cocktail bars, taxi drivers with their egalitarianism
  • Likes peace, quiet and decent reserves  (=bescheidene Rücklagen, Reserven)
  • Respect for dignity and personal privacy (although it’s hard in such commercial establishments)
  • Sees himself as a dry stick
  • Grants (gönnen) his wife, to do what ever she wants.
  • He thinks to be dependent on those, whom he loves.
  • For him, McAndrews is a place, which helps one to relax, unbend and find his soul again, like a healing process.
  • Likes routines, he compares the re-establishing in the hotel with putting and old much worn jacket.
  • At McAndrews, he has another diurnal rhythm
    • Breakfast
    • Then a walk as far as the village and back
    • 1-2 hours in the library, Boswell (he never read him in Dublin!?)
    • Lunch and an afternoon in a deck-chair (Liegestuhl). Looking to the sea, dozing, dreaming, idling
    • Dinner
    • Another strenuous walk
    • Glass of port (Portwein)
    • Gets early to bed with a good detective novel
  • Likes watching the sea, the changing of the light, watching sea-gulls (Seemöwen)
  • Although he knows, that all short-lived (vergänglich…), he feels peace.

 

  • Has always been out of step with the world
  • McAndrews= retreat or a haven, to escape from all those aggressive young man, and their “extraordinary self-confidence” and their “scarlet-nailed”-women and their endless easy chatter
  • Accepts modern professions
  • There always had been a gap between the lyrical “I” and most of his own generations
  • It hurts him, to know that the time doesn’t match to him, respectively that the time goes on
  • He cans laugh about the idiocy of the humans, so he feels part of the rest of the world
  • To take leave of the McAndrews is very hard, every time he gets nervous
  • Tries to detract by drinking a bottle of wine
  • Spend some yeas in West Africa
  • Loves the typical Irish twilight à loves the half-wilful melancholia athmosphere

àDinner like a ceremony, always the same seat, ritual

  • Has many prejudices and is superficial (oberflächlich)
  • At once associations, when he sees other humans.
    • E.g. the American woman; tells, that he like the American TV-thrillers and the accent
  • Likes traditional cooking and dislikes the food of the “modern world”
  • Conservative attitude “ladies do not dine alone in public”
  • Respects traditions
    • E.g. The cooking style of Mrs. Byrne
  • He observers exactly his fellow men, much knowledge of human nature
  • He has manners, shows respect for privacy
  • Curious
  • Likes to philosophize and curving of his mind/thoughts.
  • Uses some French expressions like “raison d’être” or “maître d’hôtel”  à well educated

(André)

The Lady with the Red Shoes

November 30, 2009
  • egoistical,  centres herself
    • summons the waiter trough the whole room, sits in the middle of the dinning-room under the candelabra
  • alone and unescorted, it isn’t odd, but it isn’t done in the McAndrews
  • in the fifties, maybe sixties
  • hair and dress matching in a indeterminate pink
  • wears glasses, which are decorated with glimmering stones
  • teeth are of an amazing and American brightness
  • drinks a double scotch on the rocks
  • isn’t ‘lady-like’
  • has an New-Yorker accent
  • when she is helpless and somebody wants to help her, she will be arrogant and talks down to somebody
    • she doesn’t cope with the menu and seems helpless, so Murphy wants to help her, but than she is arrogant and talks down to Murphy
  • strident- voice
  • rude
  • capricious
    • drinks scotch to her filled mignon so she doesn’t have to order another drink by Murphy
  • impressed by McAndrews
  • rudeness is not more than awkwardness
    • to hide her awe and inexperience in such surrounding
  • well-being, relaxation after the meal
    • shoes that the filled mignon tasted good
  • admits her bad behaviour and wants to be friendly to the other person
    • she is friendly to Murphy, because he recognized that her behaviour was foolish, so she wants to be funny, but Murphy persists unfriendly, and that’s the reason why she is after that unfriendly, too
  • embodies with features feelings
    • transfixed in a ugly grimace
  • defiant, when somebody acts against her wishes
  • gulped her scotch
    • not very ‘lady-like’
  • is a smoker
  • has a sense of shame
    • blushes when she collides with Murphy
  • is a American with a North-Mayo accent
    • was born in North-Mayo
  • alone and isolated
    • when she drinks her coffee and smokes her cigarette
  • red high-heeled shoes with large platform soles
  • her life was spread out
  • lives in the past

 

 

The lady with the red shoes hasn’t got a name. She is between fifty and sixty years old and wears red high-heeled shoes with large platform soles. Her hair and dress is matching in an indeterminate pink. Furthermore she wears glasses, which are decorated with glimmering stones. Her teeth are of an amazing and American brightness. The red shoes wearing lady is a smoker and has, at first sight, a New-Yorker accent. But in truth she has a North-Mayo accent, which is embossed by a New-Yorker accent.

 

She is an egoistical woman and wants to centre herself every time. When she came to McAndrews, she sits down in the middle of the dinning-room under the candelabra and summons the waiter trough the whole room. Furthermore the lady is alone and unescorted that isn’t odd, but it isn’t done in McAndrews. Her behaviour is in some ways not very ‘lady-like’ e.g. she drinks a double scotch on the rocks, and that’s not all, she gulps it down like a man.

 

In general the lady is an arrogant, unfriendly, rude and capricious character. Like in that case: the lady doesn’t cope with the menu and seems helpless. Murphy wants to help her, but than she is arrogant and unfriendly to him, because she doesn’t want to show that she needs help. Furthermore her rudeness is not more than awkwardness. In this way she wants to hide her awe and inexperience in such surroundings. But she can be friendly, too. When she admits her bad behaviour and wants to be friendly to other persons, like to Murphy, and the other person persists unfriendly, she sees no reason why she should be friendly anymore. So the lady is defiant, when somebody acts against her wishes.

But all this bad traits are only cortically (äußerlich) and conduces to a self-protection. In truth she is a vulnerable, afraid and actually friendly woman.

 

The character of the lady is indirectly. She is characterises by the main character of the story, so you only get to know her about his assertions. As well she is a round character, because you can’t definite say, what she will do in the next second.

(Julia)

Boswell-Complex

November 30, 2009

Intertextuality

When the lyrical „I“ describes his diurnal rhythm, he mentions to spend every day 1-2 hours in the library to read Boswell and accents that he never read him in Dublin.

James Boswell is born in 1740 in Edinburgh and was a lawyer, diarist and author. He is most famous for his biography of Samuel Johnson as well as other elaborate journals for which he spent much time in his life.

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/43/James_Boswell_by_Sir_Joshua_Reynolds.jpg

It is interesting to note, that his name has passed into the English language, where it’s a term for a detailed observer.

Relating to this we found a quotation of a British writer who was the highest paid author in the world in the 1930s.

“Never condemn the author, who has such a sharp eye for an amusing occurrence, who appreciated ingenious phrases and who got the talent to reproduce the atmosphere of a scene and the vitality of a conversation.”

„Man verachte nicht den Schriftsteller, der ein so scharfes Auge für die amüsante Begebenheit hatte, der geistreiche Formulierungen schätzte und das seltene Talent besaß, die Atmosphäre einer Szene und die Lebendigkeit einer Unterhaltung wiederzugeben.“

– W. Somerset Maugham

Hypothesis

As we concerned with the intertextuality a thought comes up to our mind. We had the idea, that Boswell could be the ideal of Ita Daly, because she also tries to reproduce the atmosphere of a scene as exactly as possible. This hypothesis is supported by the fact, that the narrated time in the short story is much shorter than the narrating time.

 

(André)


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